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derien
2007-04-02 04:12 pm (UTC)
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They most definitely do not suck. I love Tom! :D And all the little details of geography and trading and so on make it seem very real.
(One thing... a little way in, you seem to be explaining "outriders" twice in as many paragraphs?)
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(One thing... a little way in, you seem to be explaining "outriders" twice in as many paragraphs?)