I've been reading a mystery novel in what I guess is vaguely meant to be Dashiel Hammet style. As I've never read Dashiel Hammet I really don't know for sure. I'd like to learn to imitiate it, though, so what follows is an entry about my last half hour written in my imitation of that style. I think it probably sucks, but I'm open to constructive criticism. ( cooking is a mystery to me )
So, okay - fewer parenthetical comments are probably in order.
So, okay - fewer parenthetical comments are probably in order.
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