meme time! Sneak previews of the future for the Pseudo Victorian Boys!

This post is for anyone in the middle of writing a fic (or many fics!) and it's so we have a chance both to share illustrative snippets and to bitch about how recalcitrant our fics are being.


I only have the one fic going, so you're going to get a sneak preview of the end of Chapters Nine, which eor is proofreading for me right now, and beginning of Chapter Ten (of Swept Away!, for anyone new to reading my journal there's more explainations about what this is at that link, and all the previous chapters) and I would love feedback on this, because I have Phipps doing a personality flip-flop and Tom being remarkably unaware and I wonder if I'm doing romance wrong.

( cut for length and spoilers )

Now the sun is driving it's spikes into my eyes, time to abandon the computer for a while. At least this prompted me to type up the beginning of Chapter Ten which I had on paper. :)

A message for LooksToAlaska

LTA, if we're going to hang out today you'll have to call me, because I'm not going to drive down to Old Orchard Beach and wander around looking for you.

(I mean, "I might be in OOB sometime Thursday" just seems a little vague. Could you narrow it down a bit? I'm getting a little antsy, as my day is half over, I won't have much left to spend with you.)