should this be Chapter Fifteen, or should I shove it into Chapter Fourteen?

I wish I hadn't posted Chapter Fourteen so precipitously. I could edit it, of course, but I could just post this as Chapter Fifteen and not worry about it until I go back and do major re-writes when I'm done with the whole story.

( a bit of potential "Swept Away" for your comments, etc. I really need a beta. )

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( my flailing )

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