I do these things so you don't have to

If you ever make that runny ant bait with borax, honey and water, don't leave it sitting in your pantry for too long. It ferments. At least I think that was what it was doing. It had a floating sludge.

orig fic Swept Away! Ch 16

Chapter Fifteen now has a different concluding paragraph.

Chapter Sixteen is posted. I can't promise it will remain as it is forever. But then again, someday I'll be done and go back over ALL of it, change the names to protect the innocent, and add more animals, weather and music.

Gah, I just realized that if I'd managed to push myself to another 3,000 words this chapter I'd have broken 50,000. Was that too much to ask, Dodo?