mentally composing and decomposing

[derien]

How does this sound?

To Whom It May Concern:

Please allow me to respectfully inform you, regarding your property at ______, that the average temperature in the bathroom is sixty-five degrees Farenheit.  This is not a temperature conducive to taking a shit, let alone a shower.

Um.  Perhaps I've got to work on the grovelling humility a little bit.

Comments

[mizzmarvel.livejournal.com]

I think it sounds perfect.

[derien.livejournal.com]

*grin*