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No, I'm not doing a Director's Cut, it's not like anyone wants that. :) I just figured I might as well pick on my own story.
A month? A month is long enough for Winston to change his way of thinking? Even with the resident shrink?
And what's with this jumping around in time all vaguely?
And for Dog'sake did I have to have Ray have done such sick things? With Peter and Egon? Really. Was that necessary? (It went a little beyond the original stated goal of just making him a little less naive than he's usually portrayed.) (Speaking of which, I still like the line about him having wet dreams about ghosts.)
And what about that other fic that was supposed to fit in between 'Just One Kiss' and this one? The silly one where Ray turns into a woman? I mean, at least putting that in would have allowed Winston more thinking time and fodder, but I never even wrote it. I could write it, and then put all the action in what is now known as "Last Day Of the Month" into a more chronological order. It would all become a much longer story, but it would probably make more sense. Plainly speaking, I think I'm just too lazy right now.
Would it be worth it? If I ever decide I'm feeling less lazy, that is.
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Hm, I'm getting that error on my email again:
Error getting network address for "hades.rulesthe.net"
Cause: requested entry not found (11004).
I suppose it must be a good thing that it can't find Hades. Perhaps it will go to Heaven. Or I'll go to the shower and avoid further soul-tarnishing.
It's 8:12AM - do you know what your ISP is doing?
A month? A month is long enough for Winston to change his way of thinking? Even with the resident shrink?
And what's with this jumping around in time all vaguely?
And for Dog'sake did I have to have Ray have done such sick things? With Peter and Egon? Really. Was that necessary? (It went a little beyond the original stated goal of just making him a little less naive than he's usually portrayed.) (Speaking of which, I still like the line about him having wet dreams about ghosts.)
And what about that other fic that was supposed to fit in between 'Just One Kiss' and this one? The silly one where Ray turns into a woman? I mean, at least putting that in would have allowed Winston more thinking time and fodder, but I never even wrote it. I could write it, and then put all the action in what is now known as "Last Day Of the Month" into a more chronological order. It would all become a much longer story, but it would probably make more sense. Plainly speaking, I think I'm just too lazy right now.
Would it be worth it? If I ever decide I'm feeling less lazy, that is.
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Hm, I'm getting that error on my email again:
Error getting network address for "hades.rulesthe.net"
Cause: requested entry not found (11004).
I suppose it must be a good thing that it can't find Hades. Perhaps it will go to Heaven. Or I'll go to the shower and avoid further soul-tarnishing.
It's 8:12AM - do you know what your ISP is doing?