Date: 2007-09-15 12:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tronella.livejournal.com
Ah, yay for Tom and keeping calm in a crisis, mostly. I liked the tentacles. :)

A few typos and the like:

and replaced it in it's rack - just its, I think.

he had been so taken up with dealing with Phipps wound. - Phipps's?

currant of the river. - current
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