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A flashback for Ethan, I'm mulling on this. Y'know, I haven't yet shown the reader the inside of Ethan's mind at all. My primary beta, Eor, thinks I should stay all from Tom's POV, but I'm thinking I should have done some breaking out MUCH earlier on than now and done some omniscient and some from Ethan's perspective.
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Date: 2011-12-04 03:12 am (UTC)A flashback for Ethan, I'm mulling on this. Y'know, I haven't yet shown the reader the inside of Ethan's mind at all. My primary beta, Eor, thinks I should stay all from Tom's POV, but I'm thinking I should have done some breaking out MUCH earlier on than now and done some omniscient and some from Ethan's perspective.