FIC: "Last Day of the Month" - Real Ghostbusters, Winston/Ray

You can all consider this posting your opportunity to give me beta-type feedback.  I've had this one hanging out there in limbo for over a year and if nobody says much I'll consider it done.  Got inspired by daegaer's recent post about finishing up WIPs.  I was happy to find that, when I read this over, it seemed pretty much done, actually.  Also, if anyone can think of a better title I'll give it consideration.  What I'd prefer is a lyric from an Eighties song so it keeps in line with "Just One Kiss."

Title: Last Day of the Month
Author: Derien Nada
Pairing: Ray/Winston
Rating: R for implications about guy/guy/guy having happened in the past, and a little playful tussling with BDSM-y implications.(?)
Summary: 10,737 words. Sequel to "Just One Kiss."  Winston's deciding whether to take Ray up on his offer.  Starts and ends with one day, but rambles over the month he took to think, in flashback time.
Disclaimers: These characters aren't mine, I'm just making them do perverse things as free entertainment for myself and my friends.


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( Winston thudded down endless stairs with a forty-five kilogram pack on his back ahead of something that was all teeth and claws and shrieked like a steam train )

*is stupid*

Gah - such a relief to have posted that fic.  Now if I could only tear myself away from it and stop opening the post up again to edit stupid things.  Piddling little details.  I always do this.  Must have a shower and get moving - got to get eor something for his birthday.  Talk about your last minute shoppers. 

Why do I seem to like to write when I've had no caffeine or food?