derien: It's a cup of tea and a white mouse.  The mouse is offering to buy Arthur's brain and replace it with a simple computer. (Default)
( Nov. 13th, 2011 08:05 pm)
Hm, maybe I'm not really up to Chapter 14. I assessed Chapter 13 and decided it's really not quite long enough... like, it should be at least twice as long as it currently is. Chapter 12 quite long enough but I keep thinking there's one more thing I want to shove in there, but I don't want to divide a chunk at the end out and put it in Chapter 13, it just holds together the way it is, I think.
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derien: It's a cup of tea and a white mouse.  The mouse is offering to buy Arthur's brain and replace it with a simple computer. (Default)
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