I was just poking at Chapter Four of "Swept Away!", trying to make sure it's all ready to post on the second of next month. I guess there must not have been anything terribly annoying about Chapter Three? I'm sure someone would have told me if I had again repeated words or whole blocks of explanation (*slaps self in the head*). Right? So if nobody has any objections then I'm ready to print it out for my co-worker for when I get back to work on Sunday? I trust you guys to give me my final kicks in the arse, because Eor and I have probably both seen so many incarnations of the thing that it's all blurred together, now. :)
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