So, yeah. I wrote Bicky/Rocky (Wodehouse, "Jeeves and Wooster" TV show universe). I could use a beta or five to tell me if it sucks completely, or, if it does not quite completely suck, to tell me in what details it sucks. (I did it all Rocky's POV, so I don't need Britpick since he's an American, but if there's anything not period in my sentence constructions I'd love to know. I just avoided slang as much as possible. I'm not sure I did the voice well, frankly.)

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