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Well, there we go. Chapter Fifteen is finally up. I don't think I ever posted about the fact that I did actually edit Chapter Fourteen and add more to it, per Dr. Tronella's suggestion.
Title: Swept Away! - Two Boys' Adventures on The Great River (“With A Thousand Elephants!”) - A Pseudo Victorian Boys Adventure
Author: Derien
Genres: Science-fiction/Victorian Adventure/Queer Teen Romance.
Summary: In the distant future a group of settlers try to recreate Victorian England on another planet, with mixed results. Two boys from quite different social strata find themselves alone on a raft on an uncharted river.
Notes: My initial notes can be found at the top of Chapter 1, where the story so far is now archived on AO3. I don't know if this is a good idea or not, but it's easy, and hopefully I'll get back to archiving it on my own site, soon.
This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 License (Which is actually about creative works, not some dumb Facebook meme).
Chapter 15: News of the Walking Hills and walking toward the hills
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I am, as they say, wielding my own proof-loofah these days, and I'm posting extremely exhausted almost every time I post, so any and all feedback, even down to "You're missing a space between two words, here" is much appreciated.
I don't know what's going on with the feel of the story. Am I keeping the voices right? Are they deteriorating or developing?
Title: Swept Away! - Two Boys' Adventures on The Great River (“With A Thousand Elephants!”) - A Pseudo Victorian Boys Adventure
Author: Derien
Genres: Science-fiction/Victorian Adventure/Queer Teen Romance.
Summary: In the distant future a group of settlers try to recreate Victorian England on another planet, with mixed results. Two boys from quite different social strata find themselves alone on a raft on an uncharted river.
Notes: My initial notes can be found at the top of Chapter 1, where the story so far is now archived on AO3. I don't know if this is a good idea or not, but it's easy, and hopefully I'll get back to archiving it on my own site, soon.
This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 License (Which is actually about creative works, not some dumb Facebook meme).
Chapter 15: News of the Walking Hills and walking toward the hills
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I am, as they say, wielding my own proof-loofah these days, and I'm posting extremely exhausted almost every time I post, so any and all feedback, even down to "You're missing a space between two words, here" is much appreciated.
I don't know what's going on with the feel of the story. Am I keeping the voices right? Are they deteriorating or developing?
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