My Slash-the-slashers

[derien]

If anyone wants to give feedback, criticisms, etc on a work in progress, check here.

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[derien.livejournal.com]

I wish I'd had the willpower to wait it was finished before posting it. Immediately after I posted it I realized I'd forgotten to write in how very dark it should be in that scene where she enteres the house. And now my beta reader has given me some good constructive criticisms which I have to work with. And then I'm totally stuck for how to procede to the only other scene I actually have a vague thought on... in other words, I'm blocked, big time. So if yours gets done, it will automatically be better than mine.:)