My Slash-the-slashers

[derien]

If anyone wants to give feedback, criticisms, etc on a work in progress, check here.

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[tronella.livejournal.com]

I wish I had the willpower to wait until it was finished, but... no.
::reads::
Ahahah... "I'm stuck! In the closet!"... hee.
Okay, now I hate you because yours is better than mine :P
Loving it :)

[derien.livejournal.com]

I wish I'd had the willpower to wait it was finished before posting it. Immediately after I posted it I realized I'd forgotten to write in how very dark it should be in that scene where she enteres the house. And now my beta reader has given me some good constructive criticisms which I have to work with. And then I'm totally stuck for how to procede to the only other scene I actually have a vague thought on... in other words, I'm blocked, big time. So if yours gets done, it will automatically be better than mine.:)

[laurenthemself]

Oooo. My ears just went all pink.

[derien.livejournal.com]

Uh, now so are mine. I really shouldn't have posted it not-ready-for-prime-time. However, if you've got any characterisation points for me, I'm all ears (red as they are). For instance, I'm not at all sure the cursing thing is in character for Poet.

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[laurenthemself]

I haven't a clue if Poet curses a lot. I do, though.

[derien.livejournal.com]

In fact, I've been at work doing some revising, tonight. That kiss was too rushed and will have to be saved for later. But, I was surprised how well it came out, that's reassuring at least. I've never written anything like that before. Yeah, I'm a slash _baby_.

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[laurenthemself]

Oooo. Yay. Good things are happening in fandom!