My Slash-the-slashers

[derien]

If anyone wants to give feedback, criticisms, etc on a work in progress, check here.

Comments

[laurenthemself]

Oooo. My ears just went all pink.

[derien.livejournal.com]

Uh, now so are mine. I really shouldn't have posted it not-ready-for-prime-time. However, if you've got any characterisation points for me, I'm all ears (red as they are). For instance, I'm not at all sure the cursing thing is in character for Poet.

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[laurenthemself]

I haven't a clue if Poet curses a lot. I do, though.

[derien.livejournal.com]

In fact, I've been at work doing some revising, tonight. That kiss was too rushed and will have to be saved for later. But, I was surprised how well it came out, that's reassuring at least. I've never written anything like that before. Yeah, I'm a slash _baby_.

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[laurenthemself]

Oooo. Yay. Good things are happening in fandom!